Doctor Pebphiz 27 Report post Posted January 4, 2012 So, I put up a page of my book here, but do any of you think that I should also put up that short story that I wrote? I'd put it in the Fun House section, of course. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
demman32 172 Report post Posted January 5, 2012 Is this the whole plot? A guy conquering a dragon. Or is a new era of dragons coming and people have to rise and fight them? I really don't think there is enough information for me to get intrigued,but from the little snippet it sounds like it still could be pretty good. 1 Doctor Pebphiz reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Doctor Pebphiz 27 Report post Posted January 5, 2012 Is this the whole plot? A guy conquering a dragon. Or is a new era of dragons coming and people have to rise and fight them? I really don't think there is enough information for me to get intrigued,but from the little snippet it sounds like it still could be pretty good. So, this is taken from close to the end of the book, as I said. It doesn't seem like a whole book should be dedicated to one guy killing one dragon, but what if I told you that this dragon was larger than a commercial(you know, those big white ones that carry civilian passengers,) airplane, and this "guy" was nine years old? But, no, there are not very many other dragons in the entire series. In fact, I only have one other one planned, and two dragon-like creatures. The second and third books are named Tommy and the Antykae and Tommy and the Ever Burning King, respectively, so the first book is the only one where the main enemy is a dragon. I tried to close as many questions as I could in the first book, while still setting up the second and third books with more subtle hints. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Doctor Pebphiz 27 Report post Posted January 9, 2012 Bump, so that a bunch of gamers with no interest in literature can look upon a shard of my creation! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Doctor Pebphiz 27 Report post Posted January 10, 2012 I had the awesome idea of linking a different topic that I posted to this one so that I would get some more feedback. Is it going to work? Of course not. No one here cares about reading! No one here cares about my life's work! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lymiik 113 Report post Posted January 10, 2012 good story :) you should indent tho i find long things hard to read i always loose which line im on but anyways very entertaining! 1 Doctor Pebphiz reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Doctor Pebphiz 27 Report post Posted January 10, 2012 good story :) you should indent tho i find long things hard to read i always loose which line im on but anyways very entertaining! Like that? I was meaning to do this for a while. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lymiik 113 Report post Posted January 10, 2012 Like that? I was meaning to do this for a while. yes! thanks that helps out a lot! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
th3 3pic min3r 10 Report post Posted January 11, 2012 THIS IS BEAST MAKE MOWR NOWWEZZZZ 1 Doctor Pebphiz reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
demman32 172 Report post Posted January 11, 2012 I think the indenting looks better. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
